Saturday, 6 September 2014
Key to Success
In social science there is a concept called nature versus nurture. The concept questions the origins of one's trait and hypothesizes whether it's one's environment or genetics that makes an individual the type of person that they are. On the other hand, this TedTalk video demonstrates that beyond the uncontrolled world that surrounds us and the genetics that we were born with, we do have the power to attain success in our lives. This power comes from within us and is what the video calls "grit". It's a type of strength that is generated from our minds and is found along with our passions. Personally, I think the key to success is similar to the idea of trying to crawl out of a really large hole. Metaphorically, the hole represents all the disadvantages in our genetics and in the world that surrounds us. As for the individual that's in the hole, he represents the desire for success. His goal is to crawl out of this hole before it fills up and buries him underneath. Even though the idea sounds traumatising , it shares a huge connection with what it means to be successful. Success is about struggling and having to break through obstacles that are in your way. More than ever, it's a feeling that is very uncomfortable and demands something better than nature and nurture, it's perseverance . People tend to get discouraged so easily by the hapless things in their lives that they sometimes forget that the key to success is not made of the things that surround them, but it's the passion that is inside them. A famous motivational speaker named Eric Thomas once said, "when you want to succeed as bad as you want to breathe, then you'll be successful."
We don't need to search for the key to success, it's already in our pocket.
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"We don't need to search for the key to success, it's already in our pocket." This statement is so awesome I searched for it to see if it is a quotation. I can't find it so, my clever friend, if this is an indication of your writing I am deeply impressed. That said, try not to mix metaphors. That means have too many different comparisons. The pocket thing is great so the open the door thought that follows it just creates confusion.
ReplyDeleteI like your angle of using the nature/nurture debate to compare with the message promoting perseverance. It could be a bit tighter. Keep your blog posting concise so people can read them quickly.
There are several technical issues to address;
origins of one's traits - plural
take out "due to" because you've said "that makes"
that surrounds "us" - missing word
genetics that we were born "with" - missing word
discouraged "so" easily by..not too easily by
things has an extra t on the end of it
things plural, but is a group, so surround is singular - things that surround them
comma after said and before quotation marks
pocket singular, only one key needs just one pocket